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You had a good idea, but you fell short on you drawing. Next time add colours and such.
Also the size was way to big, next time dont play the whole song, cause the load time took awhile, which, the unpatient viewers of new grounds will not stand for.
Also, 4 days isnt a long time to be working on a flash, hate to break it to you. A front page flash movie takes at least a week and a half, if not alot longer.
I'm out